the Storm says

[smokingboot]

Long hair streams in the rain,
 Shorn, your neck is a river.

Comments

[jfs.livejournal.com]

Long hair in the rain.
Shyly hides 'neath your collar.
Cold, wet small of back.

:-)

[smokingboot.livejournal.com]

Thank you for posting this, it has a purity. Pretty is the word, without connotations of childlike sweetness. This is pretty the way rain is.

[caddyman.livejournal.com]

Bald, my pate is like an ice rink.

[smokingboot.livejournal.com]

:-D lyrical!

[jfs.livejournal.com]

thank you ..